So, I won't be able to release a full version, I have been watching some videos on how to be a better writer and most of the stories, (Girls and Main) was kinda short and outdated so this upcoming version is meant to fix that. I've replayed the story from a perspective of a player (If you have feedback it would be appreciated if you could tell)

Issues:

What is mana soul? What is mana? What is the Slayer Federation? - Didn't really put that information at the start of the game

Outdated information - A mention of "Thailand and I are going to war against the West"

Lame Girl Introductions - At Tampula you are given two new slayers Ayane and Seika, Ayane's level 2 story was short, in my opinion, didn't adequately showcase what Ayane Miyazaki is, she's meant to be this caring, motherly, calm and lovely girl akin to a housewife but also serious and menacing. I intended to portray these qualities in the president office scene, but it didn't come well and Seika Suzuki is a cheerful, happy, outgoing girl but I failed to highlight that she's a hardworker and a dedicated person, didn't really show her commitment and devotion to her sister's well-being and had to step up after her parents died which I failed to show again

Not good quality images - Some images in the game were like old and poor quality which my goal is to change some of those images

Side-Characters - some side characters I barely get to show what their personalities is, most of them feels like they're just there to continue throughout the story which I shouldn't have done

Memory flashbacks - Did the Dev just forget about this?!!!!

I haven't really played the entire story and stopped at chapter 1 so right now , I am changing a lot of things in there.

This is tiring but it's important for me to fix this because when I replayed the story there were mistakes that were enough to drop the game and story which is bad. I will push some builds in Patreon cause it's been a year and I recently started earning 26$ per month so this is just meant to start building my Patreon page, I am not sure if I should put the builds behind tiers or for everyone.