a few remarks about issues and pacing, I use the current public itch release

side quest mysterious pervert cannot be solved legally, the last stage (second visit to the principal's room) is broken. core issue is "if tampula_sidestory3.progress = 7:" in screen_RoomNavigation.rpy around line 139, controlling access to the room on the 2nd floor - changing it to ">= 7" works as hotfix but this may cause issues down the line.

the scrollable maps are confusing, it took me a long time to find the school and longer than I'm willing to admit to deploy slayers - was more or less by chance that I got one mission that showed in the viewbox of the tablet's map view. for the city map I would very much prefer a map view displaying everything on one screen (how many locations do you *really* plan to implement) and the mission handling would be imp better without a map: just add a deploy button next to the job in the "ongoing" tab. the world map looks great but it gets in the way in the tablet menus

generally the job thingy could be explained better, or give me at least the chance to reopen the CCUN tutorial. I still don't know why I never got any money (only reputation) or why new job offers simply stopped after I finished a good handful of them or why my total on the right side of the screen shows 7 total reputation (if the guy-with-stars icon is reputation?) but the sum of earned guy-with-stars thingies is much higher than 7. was bored after some time and changed the script to give me a gazillion credits, but maybe this is all part of the early stages and I shouldn't even able to earn moeny that early?

I am now at the moment where I can move to the fort and hope I have more to do there - so far the game felt a little bit lifeless. a lot of locations with not a lot to do; and the pacing felt off: just now when I could move to the fort I have suddenly more possible interactions, with the porn shop sales person inviting me to her home and I stumbled over the strip club (swinger club may be a better name, though :)). while a good plot and solid game mechanics are important for me to enjoy a game this one is still of the porny subgenre; you are allowed to show naked skin even early in the game :)

the above sounds more negative than intented, I do have fun so far and looking forward to see the story unfold. but imho you can still improve stuff :D